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                                                We always fall
                                                                                together.




                                                We fell
                                                                in love
                                                                with each other.


And later, when

You fell
                out of love
                with me

(and fell
                under her spell)

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                from the pedestal
                                                                                                you'd put me on.

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                from cloud nine
                                                                                                and crashed to ground.

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                from heaven
                                                                                                into depths of hell.


                                                                                And because

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                for your lies
                                                                                                and empty promises,

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                apart.



                                                We always fall
                                                                                together.
©2006-2009 ~callyn
:iconcallyn:

Author's Comments

About falling.

Wrote this last night in twenty minutes.

Comments


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:iconbornblitzed:
Wonderfully composed; you make excellent use of the space. :star:

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:| I've tried pursuing happiness. Happiness sought a restraining order.
:iconcallyn:
Thank you so much for the fav :D

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If the truth was bitter and the lies were sweet, which would you pick?
:iconhallowedbmyname:
you do realize, that i shall :+fav: just about every poem you write... i really like this one, especially the form on the page... fucking :highfive:

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Only tears of sorrow can wash out the stain of shame; only the pangs of suffering can blot out the fires of lust...
:iconcallyn:
Thanks! I really appreciate the fav. :w00t:

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If the truth was bitter and the lies were sweet, which would you pick?
:iconiamthesky:
i love this

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Peace. It does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise, trouble or hard work. It means to be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart.
:iconcallyn:
Thanks!

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If the truth was bitter and the lies were sweet, which would you pick?
:iconelle-italic:
For twenty minutes, this is really good... I love the way you've set this out. This has to be one of my favourite pieces of poetry I've seen so far. :+fav:
:iconcallyn:
Thank you for your comment and and for the fav!

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If the truth was bitter and the lies were sweet, which would you pick?
:iconlizzardcreature:
The arrangement is very cool, it really does give off the sensation/idea of falling.
Lovely work :)

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"Look, Sam . . . Woodlice." :bug:


"Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live. "
~Oscar Wilde
:icongelal:
The separation and break in line makes bold impressions.
Abducted this feeling and left it tired and wanting
Wanting more
The pain in the end is only outshadowed by the loveliness of this

Great piece...very good job

Long days, pleasant nights

--
"These things happened. They were glorious and they changed the world... and then we fucked up the endgame." - Congressman Charlie Wilson on the covert war in Afghanistan 1980-1989 .

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