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                                                We always fall
                                                                                together.




                                                We fell
                                                                in love
                                                                with each other.


And later, when

You fell
                out of love
                with me

(and fell
                under her spell)

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                from the pedestal
                                                                                                you'd put me on.

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                from cloud nine
                                                                                                and crashed to ground.

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                from heaven
                                                                                                into depths of hell.


                                                                                And because

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                for your lies
                                                                                                and empty promises,

                                                                                I fell
                                                                                                apart.



                                                We always fall
                                                                                together.
About falling.

Wrote this last night in twenty minutes.
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cableraywire Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Nice. A little generic and a teeny bit sappy, but a creative composition. Well done.
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elle-italic Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009
Have always loved this piece. I've put it up on my features: [link]

Once again, lovely poem! Especially love how the form reflects what you're trying to portray!
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moejo Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
i love you and your words
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callyn Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the :+fav:s and :+devwatch:!
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Athazagoraphobias Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
It's so simple but so effective - the use of space is superb!
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callyn Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you kindly for the fav!
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jonzoiplu Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
i'm listening to jeff buckley sing, 'we all fall in love sometimes'.


is that a weird coincidence?

(it's nice... the falling in love part. it's just the landing that we need to be careful of. some people aren't too grounded these days.)
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callyn Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Weird coincidence indeed, and yeah, when you fall and land wrongly it hurts like hell.
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NebulousMan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
Thats great! Great idea, and well written. I like the typographical presentation here, a lot of times it seams to get in the way, but it works very well with this piece.
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callyn Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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